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cyclonic-chuck
John Dotson
United States
Current Residence: Iowa
Favourite genre of music: Rock
Operating System: Win98
MP3 player of choice: WinAMP
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I just did something on the computer, and I figured, since I haven't done anything with this place in a while, so I uploaded them, although they aren't that good.

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:icon0ficialmadhatter:
0ficialmadhatter Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2003
Thanks for the the fave! :D
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insaneotaku Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2003  Professional Writer
Mm...All I can say about these items you have are...Keep trying ^^ I hope that doesn't sound too bad, but these things could definitely use some work. For your Nights picture I would suggest finding a nice picture of the character and looking off of it as you drew so as to keep the shape of the thing together. As it is now, it's barely recognizeable. At best, it's a squiggly jester. But I'm sure you can do much better if you try.

With the writing, I adamantly suggest printing it off and reading it to yourself aloud. There are parts in there that could stand some improving and a few typographical errors as well, but inside all that rough I'm sure there's a diamond. Just keep working at it and I'm sure you'll improve greatly ^^ Prove me right and keep working at it.
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cyclonic-chuck Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2003
Actually, the Nights thing was for a RP I was doing a while back, it wasn't anyone from NiGHTs itself. Now, what happened was I tried too hard for the stained glass look, before I even got to the colors. Then I kinda forgot about it.
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desiringenigma Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2003
Where have you been, bro?
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invaderjulie Featured By Owner May 31, 2003
Hey..! Thanks for the DevWatch :3..
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spyed Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2003  Hobbyist General Artist
Have you ever had a dream, that you were so sure was real? What if you were unable to wake from that dream? How would you know the difference between the dream world and the real world?

What you know you can't explain, but you feel it. You've felt it your entire deviant life, that there's something wrong with the story. You don't know what it is, but it's there, like a splinter in your mind, driving you mad.

You take the blue pill, the story ends. Your browser closes and you believe whatever you want to believe. You take the red pill, you stay in wonderland. And, I show you how deep the rabbit hole goes.

I offer only the truth, nothing more.

Take: The Red Pill
Take: The Blue Pill

Fella Point Right spyed, nobody has ever done this before.
Ninja Point Right I know. That's why it's going to work.

Do not try and bend the spoon ...
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